My first ever, first place , prized! Poem!!!!…IT’S A WINNER!!
Posted January 30th, 2009 at 3:22 am / Poetry / Author: Laura
Coloring With Crayons
By: Laura Tidwell
Can you help me reach them?
I’m just a little small.
I don’t know if there is a chance
I’ll ever get that tall.
I need to draw a picture,
To show you how I feel.
I’m just a little scared right now,
And not sure how to deal.
I need the brown for my hair,
And yellow for the sun.
I like that I have dark hair
And I’ll be sad when its gone.
I know that it will grow back,
But what girls shave their head?
I know that I should not care,
Since I could end up dead.
I want to make my cheeks pink
And wear a red dress!
Red’s my favorite color!
It’s better then all the rest!
Are my sisters coming?
I want to draw them too.
I love coloring pictures,
I hope there’s more to do.
Did I really drown?
I can’t remember much.
I do know that an angel
Left me with its touch.
Why did I see it?
What does it mean?
Am I making pretend?
It didn’t feel like a dream.
I am scared to go to sleep now,
I don’t want to die,
When I wake up from my long nap
I hope there’s a butterfly.
Seven hours later,
As my vision, becomes clear
I wake with hesitation,
And a bandage near my ear.
Look,a butterfly!
On the window ledge!
Today, I lived through brain surgery
Mommy, I’m not dead!
I want to draw a picture,
Of my family
I want to draw my nurse,
And the doctor who saved me.
Can I see my crayons?
I can not reach from here…
But one day I bet I’ll be tall
Enough to reach up there!
Comments: 2
Laura,
You are truly an amazing writer. I really enjoyed reading this poem and I like that there was a happy ending. Are you going to get this poem published anywhere? Great job!
<3 Hayley
Hayley,I am sorry I took so long to reply. I forgot about this web sight for a while ( along while. I have been getting distracted with life. I hope one day to have an anthology published, no opportunities yet though. Thank you so much for the compliment. Have a blessed day and night!
Laura